weaving nests with smoke and stone
At first glance, this is a book about birds. Read it again, and it’s a diary of shape-shifting where birds, people, and landscapes swoop and flit, worlds moving in and out of each other:
He sends me the last days’ photos, ...
We look so bonny and robin-round
beside her wren-bone frail.
She, still railing strong against
the determined flocks of starlings
roosting in her spine, liver, lungs. (63)
Sometimes the boundary between two worlds is as vivid as the edge of a nest:
Above the nest’s edge
beaks of baby birds
poke upwards
convenient
as handles on a shopping basket. (51)
Sometimes the contrast is abrupt, when "The office worker makes a bird list" of cockatoos “raucousing around”, rosellas “looping the park”, a dozen birds in vivid motion, swooping and swinging ... but suddenly, at the end, “the day at the desk begins.” (5).
And at times there seems to be no boundary at all.
On the egg-blue edge of sky
swallows embroider baroque scrolls.
Flounces of callistemon blossom
perfume the air ecstatic. (55)
These birds are above all independent of us. They flicker, swoop, dance, bustle, swing, rasp and flap. They charge back and forth in the landscape entirely on their own terms. Poets require a lot of work from birds: the stork, the bluebird, the albatross, carry huge burdens; ravens will never escape "nevermore", and twenty-one stanzas of "unpremeditated art" is a big ask for one small skylark. But here, "Open my window" (quoted in its entirety) everyone is free:
all the birds in my brain
fly out
some
zoom and pirouette
across the garden’s stage
confident of audience
some
glide smooth,
land on sturdy branches,
roost to converse
some
hop flitter
consider the window
take their own watchful time
all the birds in my brain
fly out (23)
The world has more than birds. There are fish, seahorses, and the seductive "Sea-silver otter of sleep / swims to your side ... " (34). Trees hang around the park like sad party girls, removed in many ways from the animals (= us) who surround them with our bitter air.
See these paperbarks
leaning languid
against the bluestone wall, ...
creamy trunks
girdled by metal teeth. (35)
Elsewhere, "we are two ancient fence posts / leaning together" (9).
Some of the people in this book are almost in flight, just a few heartbeats away from the birds. Jenny travels to Italy, and in the Blue Mountains we watch "Two women in pastel, crimplene skirt-suits" who
hasten along the wheelchair-wide, clifftop path
holding hands,
holding on to human ...
after so many decades
within cream ward walls. (10)
The collection starts and finishes with the last flight(s) of a beloved friend:
Jenny’s ailing,
the cancer’s called again –
determined to take her
for one final waltz.
Jenny’s longing
for the quickstep of travel,
for the Italy she’s never seen.
but on her return, she is
finding solace in the abundance
of her own backyard –
this bird-music all she wants
to accompany
her final waltz. (7)
As long as we are alive, we shift shapes and keep moving. "An ancient restorative" suggests we
Walk the sea wind
release all bonds.
Gaze at the diving gannets –
become one. (56)
But like nature, we are not static and not benign:
Inside me –
the bright-brown bantam ...
Inside me –
the white-breasted sea eagle, ...
Inside me –
the angular heron, ...
Inside me – an aviary
alive with beaks and feathers,
soft cooing to soothe,
claws to slit open
your pale belly. (60)
This is a wonderful book, and Lynda Warner’s cover is just right for the moving words inside.
Gina Mercer. weaving nests with smoke and stone. North Hobart: Walleah Press, 2015. ISBN 978187710712